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A Thought in the Night

12:42 Jul 15 2007
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**Try and understand the deeper meaning behind this**







Awake and cold, full is my soul and clean are my hands



Today I stand with one arm to the sky and another to the earth



Walking with trepidation, unsure foot steps



Witness am I to the world of men, calculated are their efforts yet unassuming



I break free of a coddled life and enter humanity as a man



Through life I see love and hate, war and peace, plenty and hunger



As each day unfolds a balance apparent, removed



The tick of a clock signals the arrival of a new order



Passing and going, man walks the earth



Slowly falling into place the pawns move with assuredness



Again I stand back seeing with eyes unclear a new wave of motion



Filtering sunlight the clouds form



Earth shakes, cities fall, nature without love



The collected cries for mercy to the gods go unheard words of pain



In the mountain I tried to hide, freedom lost, bonds have torn



Behold the new order, behold the reason of agony



Today I must choose, life or death, hope or chaos



Fleeting are the moments of existence yet so powerful are the actions of men to dictate the future



Standing alone yesterday, today I stand with the voices of a thousand



Once then twice we fall, no respect. One for one and none for all



It has begun this night of purple skies



Fire flung from the heavens, dashing against the rocky earth



All hope now lost



I see with our eyes a creature, the force behind this grand new order



We walk low, our heads born the weight of a century of despair



The dawn of red brings forth seemingly



unending oceans of men and steel, to take with no regret



Few are remaining, the ranks of humanity



Together we stand pushing back until the earth removes itself



Witness the beauty of the Best



Such power and grace the Best marches, sword in hand, to crush all life



Backs bent and chests laid bare the last sand

It is over



Awake and cold, empty is my soul and bloody are my hands



To ask a question



Is it better to witness the majesty of terror and rebel to fail? Or is it better see your fellow fall so you may live for just one day?



-- Xzavier McInnes

J.B.R2322 #6





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xxxundeadxxx
xxxundeadxxx
21:34 Feb 27 2008

thas beautiful..





Joli
Joli
18:09 Aug 10 2008

My god. This is the deepest and most beautiful thing I have seen you write. It is timely and relevant, but also apocalyptic in scope. While not a lengthy tome, its reach is epic.



These were the lines I read aloud again and again:

"Once then twice we fall, no respect. One for one and none for all



It has begun this night of purple skies"






Powerful, beautiful, frightening, and revealing. Who could possibly read this and not go back to read it again with the question you ask at the end which begs..."Which am I?"








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